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Little Trapper, 12 weeks old :aww:

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:iconnekoexcel:
Knowing nothing about your gallery, I assume you are just starting out?

First off, I like where you have the cat set in the frame of the photo. Though I might frame him(her) a little more center vertically in the photo. Though on a second glance, the line from the fridge (Is that what it is?) competes with your border. I might almost say to edit it out. I disagree with the earlier critique you received saying he should be looking at the camera.... he is. Besides, you captured a great expression on his face. I can tell you used the flash in this photo and you might experiment with a longer exposure time instead. You get better color and less shadow and things don't get quite as washed out. Though you may need to invest in a small tripod for that. (Definitely worth the investment, though)

Normally, I'd say get rid of the clutter in the photo, but this time I know you didn't choose the ideal spot for the photo, you have to do what the cat dictates. lol

One thing you might try for next time is getting perhaps below the cat's eye level or playing with different angles. This is a pretty straight on shot, no movement, but playing with taking things even more from the "cat's eye view" or from other interesting points of view, or zooming in, might make for a more dynamic shot.
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To start it's a cute kitten and you got him in an alright pose I would try to get him looking right at the camera next time.. The other things I would change is the stuff in the background next time try to get him out in the open. The lighting isn't the best either it's to dark in the back and a little too bright in the front almost washing him out the thing that is good about the lighting is the eyes aren't reflecting back. Over all it's a good pic for a photo album but some work in Photoshop can fix somethings too.

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:iconkauthar-sharbini:
Cute !!!!
what's name your cat ^^

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:iconstormowl7:
'what's name your cat'? :confused:

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:iconkauthar-sharbini:
Ah sorry for my bad in English ,, i meen that's cat have a name or not ?

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:iconstormowl7:
his name is Trapper :aww:

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:iconkauthar-sharbini:
wahh ! cute name ^_^ thank you

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:iconbigmikeattt:
Cutie pic :)

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Sorry for poor english, Greetings Mike
:iconstormowl7:
thank you :aww:

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Canon EOS DIGITAL REBEL XS
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F/5.0
41 mm
400
Apr 11, 2009, 7:55:52 PM

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