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Little Trapper, 12 weeks old
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April 12
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Canon EOS DIGITAL REBEL XS 1/64 second F/5.0 41 mm 400 Apr 11, 2009, 7:55:52 PM |
Critiques
First off, I like where you have the cat set in the frame of the photo. Though I might frame him(her) a little more center vertically in the photo. Though on a second glance, the line from the fridge (Is that what it is?) competes with your border. I might almost say to edit it out. I disagree with the earlier critique you received saying he should be looking at the camera.... he is. Besides, you captured a great expression on his face. I can tell you used the flash in this photo and you might experiment with a longer exposure time instead. You get better color and less shadow and things don't get quite as washed out. Though you may need to invest in a small tripod for that. (Definitely worth the investment, though)
Normally, I'd say get rid of the clutter in the photo, but this time I know you didn't choose the ideal spot for the photo, you have to do what the cat dictates. lol
One thing you might try for next time is getting perhaps below the cat's eye level or playing with different angles. This is a pretty straight on shot, no movement, but playing with taking things even more from the "cat's eye view" or from other interesting points of view, or zooming in, might make for a more dynamic shot.
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